11.21.2010

Mailshot Feedback 1.

What is being communicated & how?
3rd world countries (Haiti) need help after the earthquake.
How well does this answer the brief? 
Very well
Colour scheme is great & stuck to 2 colours + stock
Very informative & interesting.
Who is the audience and how well does the resolution communicate its message/content to them? 
People who can donate money, its message is well communicated & the colour scheme helps.
What are the strengths of the resolution?
The image and text work really well together visually. The blue colour is clear as it represents water.
How could it be improved? 
Maybe a little more organic, and simple. Although it looks good, try to think about the subject rather than aesthetics.
General comments.
Overall its a successful piece of design. But again, think about the subject ( suffering, despare and organicness.)

Oli Cassell & Olivia Chapman 

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