11.19.2010

Third feedback for Posters.

What statement / fact / question is being communicated to you?
142 killed due to spread of unclean water.

Is this being communicated in a clear and focused way?  [ Unsure ] 
The fact being communicated is too small? It's not clear enough and not the main focus which I believe it should be...if not a bit bigger.

Have the posters been kept simple and to the point?, also is this a Fact, Question or statement?  [ Yes ] 
I do like the images - however the type & image one perhaps does not need the words 'Most are dying from...' as it is obvious from the fact. Slightly complicated message. losing impact.

Has the restrictions of the two colours plus stock been met?  [ Yes ]

Are the two colours plus stock appropriate for the solution?  [ Yes ]

Why are the two colours plus stock appropriate/inappropriate?
Appropriate. Maybe try black stock, white hands and text and blue water.
 
Do the posters work as a set or series?  [ Yes ] 

Why do they work / dont work as a part of a set series and could this be developed further?
The only one that doesn't work as effectively is the image one. Lacks something. Drops of water might be something you progress?

Is it clearly evident which poster is TYPE, IMAGE and TYPE & IMAGE?
Not as clear as it could be. the type only is confusing as to me... it looks like you've created image by manipulating the type.

Are the posters "memorable, immediate high impact and clear"? 
Great impact from the image and strong use of colour. Think it works well - size of fact - could help too. and a smaller image

Do you feel the brief fulfilled to its full potential ?  [ No ]
You have created a good set however with a few changes I think it could be even better.

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